I need some ideas. Oh, and this time instead of only three mice, there will be many mice, but not on the screen at once. Also some graphical errors will go away.
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Mouse war 2-Starting off!
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sorry, i actually posted my review before coming here so I'll just copy and paste that. sorry if it's a bit long and wordy.
the concept is cool, the fighting style was cool, but the way it was thrown together was a little poor. I understand that this is your first big movie, but the graphics just didn't seem to fit with the cursors.
my suggestions:
use a raster graphic for the mice and give them each a different color. try putting a 20% red transparency on top of one and green and blue on the others (so that we can tell them apart). also, try using some of the animator vs. animation concept, show the tools palette and change the cursors to match the tool you're using. it just makes things flow a little better.
if you need help or more ideas, PM me. this looks like it's going to be really awesome. I might even make something like this in the near future, this was very cool and looks like something that can be done with relative quality and ease after all of the graphics are done.
I might do that, but it will mess up my symbols a bit, so I probuably won't. If you want to, you could collaborate with me.
Oh, and the animator vs animation thing: I actually am not going to have that concept, for it may seem like I was stealing the idea of animator vs animation. Also, I'm not that good of a photoshop guy.
Hmmm.... Fighting music?
<a href="http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/120518">http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/120518</a>
I would suggest this song or anything else by cheshyre.
I'll have to listen to that when I have the time. Thanks!
bradylax42
It's good to have ideas. Hmmm, what did you have in mind for this one? Sorry if my review wasn't helpful enough.
The-stick-dude
Well, I now put together so the mouse isn't gonna be so clunky and cartoon-ish. Also, it's not going to be like a four person only fight, its going to feature many different mice, like a battlefield. They appear at the same time, but the maximum mice on the screen would be four, or maybe the audience will get pissed at all the action.
It would be nice of you to find a good fight song. Thanks for the comment!